Stuff for ur to listen again. Finally manage to finish the song after keeping it in limbo for so long, tho i still feel tt the lyrics could be much much better. I'm just not a lyrical person.
Pardon the singing as usual - Standstill.mp3
Just in case u have no idea what the hell i'm singing, here goes the lyrics:
Verse 1
Late at night
I wonder why
Those words we meant to say never came through
Now it's over
You never gave me a chance
To prove how much i care for you
Pre-chorus
you know that we can go so far away from here
you know that we can go so far....away...
Chorus
But why are we
still in a standstill?
you know i think of you
and every thing that you do
Oh why are we
still in a standstill?
i still think of you
i wanna reach out to you
Verse 2
All alone
This emptiness
I'm living with the echoes in my room
If only I
can spend one more eternity
Just to make u stay with me
Prechorus
Chorus
Bridge
I still think of you every single day
i still think of you every step i take
i still think of you every possible way
i still think of youi still think of you
Chorus
Outro Solo
2 comments:
Fwah~ {o_o} pretty amaze by the song.
Some 2¢ comments:
IMHO, this song has a tune that is catchy - quite easy to remember.
Erhm, the ending was so long one ah? ~ quite draggy leh. and the middle part like very 'cramp' up. Take a breather :P
Eh, got try shouting instead of singing at the last few parts? make it more dramtic :D
Yup, I shall not critic on the singing :P (not that jialat, don't worry)
But then, it's ur work, most impt you like it can liao. No offence. Keep up the good work :)
Haha thanks for the comments, but still, singing cannot make it lar. Haha, if u can sing for me i dun mind one seriously.
As for the last bit, i think probably i'm just alittle indulgent in the solo-ing i guess. But every song shld have a solo to bring out the mood lar i feel. Yup, tt's y it's there lor.
thanks for listening tho. appreciate ur comments.
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